Graded Energy Analysis Report
Graded Economic Analysis
Assessment: 2026 Iran War & Global Impact
Final Grade
84/100
Student Name
Student Submission #1
Evaluation Date
April 9, 2026
Criteria Feedback
Claim & Evidence
16 / 20 (Proficient)
You stated a clear solution (the peace treaty), but you could have used more specific "2026 Iran War" facts from our lessons to strengthen your argument.
WHY POINTS WERE REMOVED: To get a 20, your evidence needs to be more "sophisticated," meaning you should include deeper details about the current conflict itself.
Economic Concepts
16 / 20 (Proficient)
You correctly identified that low supply causes high prices. This is a great use of "Supply and Demand."
WHY POINTS WERE REMOVED: To reach the "Expert" level, try using more specific vocabulary like "inflation," "scarcity," or "market equilibrium."
Impact Analysis
20 / 20 (Advanced)
Excellent work! You covered all three required levels: individuals (groceries/bills), businesses (shipping/manufacturing), and the global economy.
Research & Historical Events
16 / 20 (Proficient)
You mentioned two great parallels: the 2022 global conflict and the Jay Treaty. These were very relevant choices.
WHY POINTS WERE REMOVED: To reach Advanced, you need to "integrate" them more. Instead of just stating they happened, explain more deeply *how* the lessons from 1794 apply directly to our situation today.
Organization
8 / 10 (Proficient)
The essay has a clear beginning, middle, and end. The structure makes sense and is easy to follow.
WHY POINTS WERE REMOVED: You lost 2 points because the transitions between ideas were a bit sudden. Try using connecting words like "Furthermore," "In contrast," or "Consequently" to help the writing flow.
Mechanics
8 / 10 (Proficient)
Your writing is clear and easy to read.
WHY POINTS WERE REMOVED: There were a few typos (like "conflect" instead of "conflict" and "t it"). Always do one final proofread to catch these small slips!
Instructor's Final Thoughts
"This is a solid B! You have a very strong understanding of how global events hit people's wallets at home. Your choice to bring in the Jay Treaty was very creative and showed great outside-the-box thinking. To get into the 'A' range next time, focus on using more professional economic terms and double-checking your spelling."
Economic Analysis Form IR-2026 // Confidential Grade Report
