Energy Crisis Grade Sheet
Economic Analysis Report
Assessment: 2026 Iran War Impact
Total Score
64/100
Student: _________________________
Date: April 9, 2026
Overall Performance Summary
You have a good grasp of the basic economic principles of supply and demand and how they apply to the current crisis. You successfully connected the 2026 conflict to the historical 1970s oil crisis. However, the essay is incomplete and has significant issues with organization and spelling that make it difficult to read.
Grade Breakdown & Feedback
Score
12/20
Claim & Evidence
Rubric Level: 3 - Developing
Why points were taken off: You identified that the Strait of Hormuz closure caused the disruption, but the prompt asked you to explain "what is the most effective way to respond." You ended the essay right as you were about to give your opinion. Because you didn't finish the answer, you lost points here.
Score
16/20
Economic Concepts
Rubric Level: 4 - Proficient
Why points were taken off: Good job applying the "Supply and Demand" principle! You correctly explained how low supply leads to higher prices. To reach the highest level, try to use more specific economic terms and explain the long-term effects on global trade.
Score
12/20
Impact Analysis
Rubric Level: 3 - Developing
Why points were taken off: You mentioned gas prices (individuals) and shipping costs (businesses), but the explanation was a bit brief. Try to give more specific examples of how the global economy is impacted, such as changes in international shipping or factory production.
Score
16/20
Research & Events
Rubric Level: 4 - Proficient
Why points were taken off: Great inclusion of the 1970s oil crisis! To reach the top level, you should compare the two events more deeply—for example, explaining if the causes or the reactions were the same or different.
Score
4/10
Organization
Rubric Level: 2 - Emerging
Why points were taken off: The assignment requires 3 or more paragraphs. Your response is currently one block of text. To improve, use separate paragraphs for your Introduction, Body, and Conclusion.
Score
4/10
Mechanics
Rubric Level: 2 - Emerging
Why points were taken off: There are many spelling and grammar mistakes (like "Harmuz", "natton", "globoa", and "savage") that make it hard to read. Proofreading your work before turning it in will help you catch these errors!
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