Crisis Analysis Grade Report
CRISIS ANALYSIS FEEDBACK
Economic Analysis Form IR-2026 | Confidential Grade Sheet
Final Score 74/100
Student
Student Response
Assessment Date
April 9, 2026
Instructor Feedback Summary
Your essay shows a strong understanding of how oil shortages ripple through the economy. You effectively used historical parallels to support your points. However, you missed a key part of the prompt: the 2026 Iran War context. To improve, ensure you anchor your argument in the specific scenario provided and polish your sentence structure to avoid grammatical confusion.
Score Breakdown & Explanations
12 of 20
Developing
Claim / Evidence
While your claim identifies the three areas of impact, it fails to mention the 2026 Iran War specifically. The prompt asked how the war's shortages affect the economy, but your response focused on oil shortages in general.
12 of 20
Developing
Economic Concepts
Your explanation of supply and demand was a bit vague. The sentence "When supply decreases but directly in higher gas coats..." is grammatically incomplete and hard to follow. Be sure to clearly state that a decrease in supply with steady demand leads to higher prices.
16 of 20
Proficient
Impact Analysis
Great job addressing all three levels (individuals, businesses, and global). You successfully identified how budgets, profits, and inflation are all connected to the shortage.
20 of 20
Advanced
Research / Events
This was the strongest part of your essay. Using the 2022 Russia-Ukraine conflict and the 1973 oil crisis provided excellent historical context for your arguments.
8 of 10
Proficient
Organization
The essay is logically organized into three clear paragraphs. Each paragraph focuses on a specific part of the prompt.
6 of 10
Developing
Mechanics
Several errors impacted the clarity of your writing. For example:
- "gas coats" should be "gas costs".
- The second paragraph is missing a closing period.
- The first paragraph has a confusing sentence structure regarding supply.
Next Steps for Improvement
For your next draft, try reading your work aloud to catch missing words or typos like "coats." Also, remember to re-read the prompt halfway through writing to make sure you aren't leaving out specific details (like the Iran War) that the instructor is looking for!
