Energy Crisis Feedback Report
Graded Economic Analysis
Assessment: 2026 Iran War & Global Economic Impact
Final Score
74/100
Student Name
Anonymous Student
Date Graded
April 9, 2026
Criterion Breakdown
Claim / Evidence
16 / 20
Clear claim that answers prompt with relevant supporting evidence.
Feedback: Your claim is clear and direct. The specific calculation of $12/week for an average household adds strong quantitative evidence to your argument.
Economic Concepts
16 / 20
Correctly uses Supply & Demand concepts in the analysis.
Feedback: Good application of the Law of Demand. You correctly explain that reducing "demand" (oil usage) can force prices down over time.
Impact Analysis
16 / 20
Analyzes impacts on individuals, businesses, and global economy clearly.
Feedback: You hit all three levels: individuals (household budgets), businesses (manufacturing/transport costs), and global (Asia's cooking gas crisis).
Research / Events
12 / 20
Includes 1-2 events but connections are weak or inaccurate.
Feedback: You used a great statistic about Asia (44% LPG), but the essay lacks historical parallels or specific outside events to ground the 2026 crisis. Consider comparing this to past oil shocks.
Organization
8 / 10
Organized into 3+ paragraphs with a logical flow of ideas.
Feedback: The flow from individual cost to business impact to global struggle is very logical. Your four-paragraph structure works well.
Mechanics
6 / 10
Several errors present; reader can still understand meaning.
Feedback: Watch out for informal abbreviations like "cause" instead of "because" and "alot." Proofread for typos like "Lpus" (likely meant LPG).
Final Instructor Summary
"You've demonstrated a solid understanding of how interconnected global economies are. Your specific examples regarding household spending and Asian cooking gas made your argument much more persuasive. To reach the 'Advanced' tier, work on incorporating historical research—for instance, how did the 1970s oil embargoes change energy policy? Also, ensure your writing remains professional by avoiding informal slang and double-checking spelling. Overall, a strong analytical effort!"
