Outlandish Editors CUPS Worksheet
Outlandish Story Lab • Editing Mission 1
Operation Marshmallow Volcano
Name:
Date:
Mission: Read the bizarre news report below. Use standard editing marks to correct the Capitalization, Usage, Punctuation, and Spelling errors directly in the text. Then complete the CUPS checklist!
Eyewitness Photo: Mount Fizzy
15 Errors Hidden Below
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On tuesday morning, dr. hazel wafflewood stared at her scyence computer
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in complete shock Mount Fizzy, the ancient purple volcano, had suddenley
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woke up! Instead of glowing lava it blasted out thousends of fluffy
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marshmallows wearing tiny party hats. "Grab your spoons" yelled the doctor,
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because sticky strawberry syrup was flowing toward the pacific ocean The
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aliens from planet sugar was cheering and dancing on top of warm toaster
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waffles. is this the most delishous disaster in human histiry
Built-In CUPS Editing Rubric
Total Errors to Find: 15
C
Capitalization
4 Errors to Fix
Day of week (tuesday) Title name (dr. hazel) Proper ocean name Sentence start (is this)
U
Usage / Grammar
3 Errors to Fix
Irregular verb (woke) Subject-verb (aliens was) Planet name capitalization
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Punctuation
4 Errors to Fix
Missing period after shock Intro comma after lava Dialogue comma ("...spoons,") Question mark at the end
S
Spelling Demons
4 Errors to Fix
scyence → science suddenley → suddenly thousends → thousands delishous / histiry
Polished Rewrite: Lines 1–3 Rewrite the first 3 lines correctly below
Proofreader Symbols: Triple underline = Capitalize | Slash = Lowercase | ^ caret = Insert punctuation | sp = Fix spelling Page 1 of 2
Outlandish Story Lab • Editing Mission 2
The Galactic Cheese Rocket
Name:
Score: / 15
Mission: Commander Cheddar is blasting through deep space, but his flight log is loaded with blunders! Detect and edit the 15 hidden CUPS errors, then verify your findings in the checklist.
Flight Cam: Commander Cheddar
15 Errors Hidden Below
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Last friday night, sir squeaks built a magical rocket out of old
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cereal boxes and glitter. His brave little hamster crew travaled into
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outer space looking for the lost moon of cheddar The rocket engine was
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powered by peanut butter disco beats and sunflower seeds. They goed
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past glowing stars and purple comets "We will reach the cheese soon,
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squeaked the captain. The fuzzy astronots couldnt beleive their eyes when
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they seen giant space mice playing laser tag with nachos
Built-In CUPS Editing Rubric
Total Errors to Find: 15
C
Capitalization
4 Errors to Fix
Day of week (friday) Hamster title (sir squeaks) Moon name (cheddar) Sentence starter (The)
U
Usage / Grammar
3 Errors to Fix
Past tense verb (goed → went) Irregular past (seen → saw) Pronoun check (their / there)
P
Punctuation
4 Errors to Fix
Missing period after Cheddar Commas in series (butter, disco...) Closing quotes ("...soon!") End mark after nachos (!)
S
Spelling Demons
4 Errors to Fix
travaled → traveled astronots → astronauts couldnt → couldn't beleive → believe
Polished Rewrite: Lines 5–7 Rewrite the final dialogue and action lines correctly below
Editor Self-Rating: ⭐ Rookie Editor • ⭐⭐ Star Proofreader • ⭐⭐⭐ Master Grammar Alien
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