Friendship Shift ECR Handout
6th Grade ELA • Two-Part Module
The Power of Friendship ECR
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Session 1 (30 Mins): Close Reading & Text Analysis Part 1 of 2
Active Reading Mission: As you read, underline how Mateo acts at the start, put a ★ star next to Priya's acts of kindness, and circle words showing Mateo changing.
The Clay Whistle
By Maya Linwood
[1] For the first three weeks at Oak Creek Middle, Mateo moved like an island. In the hallways, his eyes stayed locked on the scuffed linoleum tiles, and in classes, his jacket remained zipped to his chin. Whenever someone tried to start a conversation, Mateo gave polite, one-word replies that ended the exchange instantly. He had convinced himself that keeping people at a distance was safer than trusting someone and being let down.
[2] That strategy crumbled on Tuesday when Mr. Alvarez paired him with Priya for a ceramics unit. Priya was a whirlwind of messy apron strings, energetic questions, and paint-splattered sneakers. "Our goal is a twin pair of Andean whistle flutes," she announced, placing a cold, wet gray lump of earthenware between them. Mateo frowned and pulled his stool back. "I'm not artistic. Just tell me what to do so we don't fail."
[3] Instead of getting frustrated, Priya laughed gently. "Nobody is born knowing how to shape clay, Mateo. It just takes patience." When Mateo tried hollowing his flute, his thumbs pressed too hard, causing the clay walls to collapse into a cracked ruin. Mateo froze, his ears burning with embarrassment. He expected the usual eye-roll or sarcastic comment he'd heard at his previous school.
[4] Instead, Priya picked up a sponge, dipped it in water, and passed it to him. "Mistakes in clay are great," she said simply. "Water lets you rewrite anything. Here, hold the base while I smooth the ridge." She didn't take over; she partnered with him. For the next twenty minutes, Priya patiently guided Mateo's hands, sharing funny stories about her own clumsy art projects until Mateo found himself doing something he hadn't done all month: laughing out loud.
[5] By Friday, their finished whistle produced a clear, melodic birdcall. More importantly, Mateo felt something shift inside his chest. Later that afternoon in the cafeteria, he spotted Marcus—a quiet new student who had arrived only yesterday—sitting alone, nervously opening a lunchbox. Two weeks ago, Mateo would have looked away. Instead, he grabbed his tray, unzipped his heavy jacket, and took a seat across from Marcus. "Hey," Mateo smiled. "Is this seat taken?"
Read carefully & completed all annotations? Turn to Page 2 for text analysis. Page 1 of 4
Session 1: Text-Dependent Comprehension
Analyze the characters, conflict, and turning points before writing
30 Min Goal
A Close Reading Questions
1. In paragraph 1, the author writes that Mateo "moved like an island." What figurative meaning does this phrase convey about Mateo's attitude?
2. How does Priya react when Mateo breaks the clay? How does her reaction differ from what Mateo feared?
B Character Transformation Tracker (Pre-Writing Evidence)
Collect text evidence for tomorrow's ECR
1. Mateo At The Start
2. The Turning Point (Priya)
3. Mateo At The End
His Thoughts & Actions:
Exact Quote / Evidence:
How Priya Inspires Change:
Exact Quote / Evidence:
How Mateo Treats Others Now:
Exact Quote / Evidence:
Session 1 Checkpoint: Keep this tracker safe. You will use your quotes and observations tomorrow to draft your ECR!
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Session 2: ECR Planning & Outline
Unpack the prompt, craft your claim, and organize evidence
30 Min Goal
Extended Constructed Response Prompt
Read the story "The Clay Whistle." Based on the text, write an extended response analyzing how Priya’s friendship changes Mateo for the better. In your response, explain how his feelings, thoughts, and actions shift from the beginning to the end of the story. Use specific evidence from the text to support your answer.
What must I DO? (Tasks)
- State a clear claim about how friendship changed Mateo.
- Show his shift (Beginning → Turning Point → End).
- Cite at least 2 direct text quotes/evidence.
Sentence Starters Toolkit
Claim: "In the story, Priya's friendship transforms Mateo by..."
Evidence: "In paragraph 4, the author writes, '...'"
Explanation: "This demonstrates that Mateo learned to..."
Pre-Writing Graphic Organizer
1. Central Claim / Thesis Statement: Answer the prompt directly in 1 complete sentence
2. Body Point 1: Mateo Before vs. Priya's Action Quote + Explanation of his walls coming down
3. Body Point 2: How Mateo Passed Kindness Forward Quote + Explanation of his cafeteria choice with Marcus
4. Concluding Thought / Big Takeaway: Why friendship matters in middle school
Plan complete? Turn to Page 4 to write your full response! Page 3 of 4
Extended Constructed Response
Final Written Response
Target: 2-3 Well-Developed Paragraphs
Writer's Quality Checklist (Check each box as you write & edit):
Clear Claim / Focus 2+ Text Quotes Cited Explains Mateo's Growth Capitalization & Punctuation
Compose your response below: Remember to indent your paragraphs!
Teacher Evaluation: Claim: __ / 4 Evidence & Analysis: __ / 4 Conventions: __ / 2
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