Draft Doctor Notes
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Grade 3 STAAR Writing Toolkit • TEKS 3.11(C) & 3.11(D)
Revising vs. Editing: The Draft Doctor
Revising
Makes your writing SOUND better (Ideas & Flow)
Editing
Makes your writing LOOK correct (Rules & Mechanics)
R
REVISING
Use A.R.M.S.
Improve your message, clarity, and sentence structure!
A ADD
Add descriptive sensory words, details, explanations, or transition words.
R REMOVE (Delete)
Take out sentences or words that repeat or don't stay on the main topic.
M MOVE (Rearrange)
Change the order of sentences or words so thoughts flow logically.
S SUBSTITUTE & COMBINE
Trade weak words for strong verbs. Join choppy sentences using and, but, or, so.
👀 Revising in Action:
The puppy ran. He was happy.
➔ The fluffy golden puppy sprinted across the yard because he saw a tennis ball!
E
EDITING
Use C.U.P.S.
Fix conventions, grammar rules, spelling, & punctuation!
C CAPITALIZATION
Start of sentences, proper nouns (names, Austin, Texas, October), and "I".
U USAGE & AGREEMENT
Subject-verb agreement: The dog barks vs. The dogs bark. Complete sentences (no fragments!).
P PUNCTUATION (STAAR Big 2!)
- • Commas: Items in series (apples, pears, and plums) & compound sentences (before but, and, so).
- • Apostrophes: Contractions (can't, isn't) & possessives (Leo's cat).
S SPELLING
Check word wall words, silent-e, and vowel patterns (there / their / they're).
🔍 Editing in Action:
on monday maria dont have no pets.
➔ On Monday, Maria didn't have any pets.
STAAR Test Detective Secret: "The 1-Second Check"
Question says: "What is the best way to revise sentence 4?" or "Which sentence should be added/deleted?" ➔ Think ARMS! (Meaning & Flow)
Question says: "What change should be made in sentence 8?" or "How should sentence 12 be edited?" ➔ Think CUPS! (Capital, Punctuation, Spelling)
Notebook Quick Check: Revise or Edit? Circle R (Revise) or E (Edit) for each task!
1. Changing went to galloped for a better verb.
R E
2. Putting an apostrophe in dont ➔ don't.
R E
3. Deleting a sentence that repeats the same idea.
R E