Agency Unmasked Slides Agency Unmasked
The Rhetoric of the Exonerative Passive
The Infamous Refrain
"Mistakes were made."
Grammar Check
Who made the mistakes?
The agent is missing.
Rhetorical Effect
Admitting the event without admitting culpability .
The "Exonerative" Passive
Definition
A strategic use of the passive voice to delete the actor (agent) from a sentence, thereby shielding them from responsibility.
The Formula
[Object] + [Form of "to be"] + [Past Participle] (Agent Removed)
Anatomy of Agency
Active Voice
"I made a mistake."
• Direct ownership
• Clear accountability
• Human agent front-and-center
Passive Voice
"Mistakes were made."
• Indirect report
• Obscured accountability
• Process/Event centered
Case Study 1
The Iran-Contra Affair (1987)
"Now, what should happen when you make a mistake is this: You take your knocks, you learn your lessons, and then you move on. We will say no more about that in this administration. There's only one way to move forward. We're going to get the job done."
"Mistakes were made."
Analysis: Notice the shift from "you" (generalizing) to the absolute removal of "I" or "We" in the crucial admission.
Rhetorical Interrogation
1. Does the passive voice make an apology more or less sincere?
2. Can you think of a situation where passive voice is ethical or necessary ?
3. How does removing the agent change our emotional response to the news?
Non Apology Analysis Worksheet Grammar & Governance
Analyzing the Exonerative Passive
Student:
Date:
The Rhetorical Strategy
The exonerative passive is more than just a grammatical choice; it is a shield. By removing the agent (the person doing the action), a speaker can acknowledge that an event occurred without acknowledging who performed it. Today, you will deconstruct three famous examples of this strategy.
1 Deconstructing the Non-Apology
Case 01: The Vietnam War President Lyndon B. Johnson
"Mistakes were made, but we are not going to spend our time looking back at who made them."
Identify the Passive Verb Phrase:
Who is the missing agent? (Who actually made the mistakes?)
Analysis: How does this grammatical choice protect the speaker's administration?
Case 02: Bridgegate Scandal Gov. Chris Christie
"I was told that this was a traffic study... It is clear that mistakes were made by the staff."
Identify the Passive Verb Phrases (There are two):
Rhetorical Shift: Why does Christie add "by the staff" to the end? How does this differ from Case 01?
2 Narrative Reconstruction
Rewrite the following "exonerative" statements into Active Voice . You must identify or invent a plausible agent for each action.
"The hospital's computer systems were hacked, and patient records were compromised."
Active Reconstruction:
"A high-speed chase occurred, resulting in the suspect being shot."
Active Reconstruction:
"It has been decided that your employment will be terminated effective immediately."
Active Reconstruction:
Final Reflection
In your opinion, which of the reconstructed active sentences feels the most "dangerous" or "risky" for a public official or corporation to say? Why?
Exonerative Passive Teacher Guide Teacher Guide
Lesson 1: The Exonerative Passive
Confidential
Learning Objectives
Identify the grammatical components of the passive voice in complex political statements.
Explain the rhetorical impact of "agent deletion" in public discourse and crisis management.
Transform passive, agency-obscuring sentences into active, transparent ones by restoring the grammatical subject.
Duration
60–90 Minutes
Materials
Agency Unmasked Slides, Non-Apology Analysis Worksheet, Projector/Screen.
Instructional Flow
01
The Hook (10 min)
Open the slides to the "Infamous Refrain." Ask students to count how many times they've heard the phrase "Mistakes were made." Prompt a quick brainstorm: Why don't politicians say "I made a mistake"? What is the legal or social difference between those two sentences?
02
Direct Instruction (20 min)
Use the Agency Unmasked Slides to define the exonerative passive. Emphasize that passive voice isn't "wrong"—it's a tool. In science, it focuses on the experiment; in politics, it focuses on the event while hiding the perpetrator. Walk through the Reagan case study.
03
Guided Practice & Worksheet (30 min)
Distribute the Non-Apology Analysis Worksheet . Have students work in pairs to analyze the Lyndon B. Johnson and Chris Christie quotes. Circulate to check if they can identify the "be + past participle" structure.
Worksheet Answer Key & Facilitation
Case 01: Lyndon B. Johnson
Verb: "were made"
Analysis: LBJ is acknowledging the Vietnam War's failures without identifying himself or his generals as the cause. This frames the "mistakes" as atmospheric events—like bad weather—rather than specific human choices.
Case 02: Chris Christie
Verbs: "was told" and "were made"
Analysis: Christie uses the first passive ("was told") to frame himself as a victim of misinformation (he is the receiver, not the actor). In the second ("were made by the staff"), he adds a prepositional agent (by the staff) to explicitly deflect blame away from himself while maintaining the passive distance.
Part 2: Reconstruction Examples
• "Hackers breached the hospital's computer systems and compromised patient records."
• "A police officer shot the suspect following a high-speed chase."
• "I have decided to terminate your employment." or "The CEO has decided..."
Media Bias Decoder Slides The Newsroom Filter
Grammar as a Tool of Media Bias
Exercise: Front Page News
Consider this scenario:
"A security guard at a tech firm used pepper spray on a group of protesters who were blocking the main entrance. Two people were treated for eye irritation."
Draft two headlines in your notes:
1. Focus on the guard's action.
2. Focus on the protesters' experience.
Ask yourself:
Which headline uses Active Voice ? Which uses Passive ? How does the "villain" or "victim" change based on the verb?
The "Passive Victim" Effect
Active Agent
"Police shoot man."
• Clear cause and effect
• Responsibility is assigned
• Subject (Police) = Actor
Passive/Obscured
"Man shot in officer-involved incident."
• Action "just happens" to the man
• Responsibility is diffused
• Subject (Man) = Receiver
Nominalization: Leveling Up
Sometimes, we don't even use a verb. We turn the action into a noun .
Verb form (Active)
"The CEO lied."
Noun form (Nominalized)
"Corporate misstatements occurred."
Notice how the lie becomes an object—an "occurrence" rather than an act of deception.
Comparative Analysis
Headline A
"Bomb kills 12 in crowded market."
Headline B
"12 killed in market explosion."
Discussion:
Which headline implies a deliberate act by a person?
Which headline implies a tragic, but perhaps accidental, event?
How does the focus on numbers vs. the actor change the story?
Headline Shift Activity The Wire Report
Media Analysis Lab: Lesson 02
Analyst:
Part 1: The Agency Spectrum
Below are three headlines reporting on the same fictional event. Rank them from 1 (Most Active/Agent-Focused) to 3 (Most Passive/Abstract).
Rank
"Stock prices plummet as tech giant announces massive layoffs."
Rank
"3,000 workers lose jobs in corporate restructuring phase."
Rank
"CEO fires 3,000 employees in profit-maximizing move."
Part 2: The Rewriting Challenge
Convert the following passive or nominalized headlines into clear, Active Voice headlines that name a specific agent.
Obscured Headline (Passive/Nominal) Restored Headline (Active) "Budget cuts were approved by the committee today." "A significant leak of user data was discovered."
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| "Several citizens were detained during the protest." |
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| "Officer-involved shooting leads to fatality." |
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Part 3: Critical Analysis
Question for Reflection:
Journalists often argue that passive voice (e.g., "was shot") is more "objective" because it only reports what happened without assigning blame before a trial. Do you agree? Does using the passive voice make a story more neutral, or does it subconsciously favor the more powerful party?
Newsroom Narrative Teacher Guide Teacher Guide
Lesson 2: Headlines & Bias
Newsroom
Context & Purpose
This lesson shifts the focus from political apologies to journalistic objectivity . Students will explore how "neutral" reporting often uses the passive voice to protect powerful institutions (police, corporations, government) by framing their actions as atmospheric occurrences rather than choices.
Key Concepts
• NOMINALIZATION
• AGENT OBFUSCATION
• OBJECTIVITY VS. NEUTRALITY
Instructional Steps
01
Headline Blitz (10 min)
Use Slide 2 ("Front Page News"). Have students share their headlines. Look for patterns: Do students who blame the guard use active voice? Do students who want a "neutral" tone use nominalization (e.g., "Pepper spray usage leads to treatment")?
02
The "Officer-Involved" Phenomenon (15 min)
Discuss the specific phrase "officer-involved shooting." Ask: Who is the subject of that phrase? (None—it's an adjective-noun cluster). Why do police departments use this phrase in press releases? Answer: It transforms a violent action into a bureaucratic event.
03
Analysis & Lab Work (30 min)
Distribute the Headline Shift Activity . Guide students through Part 1, ranking by agency. The ranking is subjective but generally moves from "The CEO fires" (High Agency) to "Stock prices plummet" (Abstract/Low Agency).
Activity Key & Discussion Points
Part 1 Ranking Guidance
1 (Most Active): "CEO fires 3,000 employees..." (Clear actor, clear victim).2 (Middle): "Stock prices plummet as tech giant announces..." (Focus on the market effect, but names the company).3 (Most Passive): "3,000 workers lose jobs..." (Action is done to the workers; employer is unnamed).
Part 2 Rewriting Examples
• "The Budget Committee approved the cuts today."
• "Cyber-criminals leaked significant user data."
• "Police detained several citizens during the protest."
• "A police officer shot and killed a suspect."
The "Objectivity" Debate (Part 3)
Facilitator Note: There is no single "right" answer. The goal is for students to realize that "objectivity" is often a framing choice. By using the passive voice, journalists often adopt the perspective of the institution in power, as these institutions are the primary sources for early reports.
Corporate Spin Slides The Corporate Shield
Liability, Logic, and the Passive Voice
PR vs. Legal
Public Relations
Goal: Build trust, apologize clearly, show empathy, and move forward.
"We are sorry we failed you."
Legal Counsel
Goal: Minimize liability, prevent lawsuits, and avoid admitting fault in court.
"A failure was identified."
The Grammar of Liability
Admitting Fact (Passive)
"Data was accessed by an unauthorized party."
Legal status: Safe. Acknowledges the event occurred.
Admitting Fault (Active)
"Our security team left the server unencrypted."
Legal status: Dangerous. Assigns negligence to the company.
The Fine Print
"BY ACCESSING THE SERVICES, IT IS UNDERSTOOD THAT NO GUARANTEES ARE MADE REGARDING SYSTEM UPTIME. LOSS OF DATA MAY BE EXPERIENCED DURING MAINTENANCE PERIODS. LIABILITY IS HEREBY DISCLAIMED."
• Who "understands"?
• Who "disclaims"?
• Who "makes" guarantees?
• Who "experiences" loss?
Mission: Damage Control
A self-driving car in your company's fleet just struck a fire hydrant. The public wants answers. The lawyers want silence.
Open your Simulation Pack now.
Crisis Manager Simulation Pack Crisis Protocol
Simulation Lab: Corporate Communications
URGENT
ID: SIM-882-AX
Incident Brief: Project "Auto-Glide"
At 14:00 today, an experimental autonomous delivery bot operated by Swift-Logistics malfunctioned in a pedestrian mall. The bot accelerated unexpectedly, striking a sidewalk cafe table. Two customers were knocked over; one sustained minor bruising. The bot's sensors failed to detect the obstacle due to a software glitch in the latest update.
PR Goal
"Maintain brand reputation. Sound caring and responsive."
Legal Goal
"Do not admit negligence. Protect the company from litigation."
1. Evaluating the Extremes
Option A: The PR "Too-Active" Draft
"We made a mistake today. Our software developers released a buggy update that caused our bot to crash into innocent customers. We take full blame."
Problem: The Legal team will fire you. You just handed the victims a million-dollar lawsuit.
Option B: The Legal "Too-Passive" Draft
"An interaction occurred involving a unit and stationary objects. Procedures were followed. Future events may be mitigated."
Problem: The public will hate you. This sounds like an alien wrote it; it has zero empathy.
2. Threading the Needle
Your Task: Write a 3-sentence press release. Use the Passive Voice to describe the malfunction (avoiding blame) but use Active Voice to describe your company's "caring" response.
Sentence 1: The Event (Focus on what happened, not who did it)
Example: "Earlier today, an unexpected incident was reported..."
Sentence 2: The Cause (Use the passive voice or nominalization to shield the devs)
Sentence 3: The Action (Use ACTIVE voice to show the company is helping)
Strategic Reflection
In Sentence 2, how did your choice of grammar protect the software development team specifically? Why is this choice better for the company than saying "Our developers forgot to test the update"?
Corporate Crisis Teacher Guide Teacher Guide
Lesson 3: Corporate Crisis Simulation
Management
Instructional Context
In this lesson, students take on professional personas. They must navigate the real-world tension between transparency (active voice) and liability protection (passive voice). The goal is to show that grammatical voice is often mandated by institutional departments (Legal) to protect the bottom line.
Essential Question
Can a corporation be both honest and legally safe? How does grammar bridge that gap?
The Simulation Flow
01
PR vs. Legal (15 min)
Present Slide 2. Ask students: "If you were the victim, which department would you like more?" Then ask: "If you were the CEO, which department would you listen to?" Emphasize that "Active Voice = Admission of Fault" in a courtroom.
02
The Malfunction Brief (10 min)
Walk through the "Swift-Logistics" scenario. Ensure students understand the specific "villain" in the active-voice version: The software developers . Explain that naming them creates a direct path for a lawsuit against the company for negligence.
03
The "Drafting" Phase (35 min)
Students work individually or in small teams to draft their press release. Rule: They cannot use active voice for the accident itself, but they SHOULD use it for their help (e.g., "We are providing medical support").
The "Ideal" Press Release
"Earlier today, an unexpected incident occurred involving an autonomous unit at the downtown mall. Preliminary findings suggest that a technical anomaly was triggered during a routine update. Swift-Logistics is currently supporting the affected individuals and we are working closely with local authorities to ensure public safety."
Sentence 1 (Passive)
"An incident occurred..." Framing it as an event that happened, not an action Swift-Logistics took.
Sentence 2 (Passive)
"An anomaly was triggered..." Passive voice protects the software team. It's an "anomaly," not a "mistake."
Sentence 3 (Active)
"Swift-Logistics is supporting..." High agency here to show responsiveness and corporate social responsibility (CSR).
Literary Agency Slides Subject or Object?
Grammar and Power in Literature
The Gender Reveal
"[Character A] decided to leave the village that night. [Character B] was ushered into the carriage. Directions were given. The trunk was packed by the servants."
Which character has power?
Character A makes decisions and acts. Character B is moved, usherd, and acted upon.
The Grammatical Reality
In 19th-century literature, the passive voice is often reserved for those without social or political standing.
Grammar as Characterization
Active = Autonomy
Verbs like conquered, decided, struck, built . The character is the master of their fate.
Passive = Subjugation
Verbs like was led, was married, was told, was kept . The character is a passenger in the plot.
"The history of the world is a history of who got to be the grammatical subject of the sentence."
— Literary Critical Lens
Example: Brontë’s Jane Eyre
"I was taken to the red-room... I was locked in."
Passive Voice: Childhood helplessness.
"Reader, I married him."
Active Voice: Ultimate agency/autonomy.
Note the arc: Jane moves from being the object of other people's actions (passive) to the subject of her own destiny (active).
Textual Power Audit
We are going to analyze passages from various eras. You will look for "Agency Shifts"—moments where characters lose or gain grammatical power.
Look for the "be" verbs. Look for the "by" phrases.
Textual Power Worksheet The Agency Audit
Literature & Power Analysis: Lesson 04
Scholar:
Part 1: The Grammatical Subject
Read the passage below. Identify every Subject-Verb pair. Underline the subject once and the verb twice. If the verb is in the Passive Voice (e.g., "was taken"), circle the entire phrase.
"The door was opened by a stern-looking man. I was told to wait in the hall. After an hour, the master of the house entered. He looked at me with cold eyes. He decided that I should stay. I was led away to the attic room where my work would begin."
The Active Characters
List the characters who are the subjects of active verbs:
The Passive Characters
List the characters who are the subjects of passive verbs:
Part 2: Case Study — The Narrative of Frederick Douglass
Douglass often uses the passive voice when describing the systems of slavery, but shifts to a powerful active voice when describing his own intellectual and physical resistance.
Passage A:
"I was often awakened at the dawn of day by the most heart-rending shrieks of my own aunt... She was whipped with the heavy cowskin."
Rhetorical Effect of the Passive Voice here:
Passage B:
"I seized him with both hands... I held him as tightly as I could. I had resolved that he should not whip me again."
Rhetorical Effect of the Active Voice here:
Part 3: Synthesis
If you were writing a story about a character who is slowly gaining their independence from a controlling guardian, how would you use active and passive voice to show (not tell) that change over the course of the book? Give one specific example of a sentence from the beginning and one from the end.
Beginning (Passive/Low Agency):
End (Active/High Agency):
Literary Theory Teacher Guide Teacher Guide
Lesson 4: Gender & Agency in Literature
Critical Theory
Academic Context
This lesson bridges the gap between linguistics and literary criticism. Students will move beyond "finding metaphors" to "finding agency" in syntax. The focus is on how canonical and sub-canonical authors use the passive voice to underscore social powerlessness and active voice to claim autonomy.
Theoretical Lens
• FEMINIST CRITICISM
• POST-COLONIAL THEORY
• NARRATOLOGY
The Critical Flow
01
The Subject/Object Hook (15 min)
Use Slide 2. Don't reveal the genders of the characters initially. Ask students to describe the personality of "Character B" based only on the passive verbs. (They might say: weak, subservient, high-class/sheltered). Then reveal that historically, "Character B" roles were almost exclusively female in Victorian literature.
02
Passage Analysis: Frederick Douglass (20 min)
Discuss how Douglass uses the passive voice for his aunt's suffering to show that the system of slavery has stripped her of agency—she is whipped ; she does not choose her state. Contrast this with his own fight against Covey (Passage B), where he reclaimed himself as the subject of his own narrative.
03
Synthesis: Creative Writing (25 min)
Have students complete the Textual Power Worksheet . For Part 3, push them to think of voice as a narrative clock. If a character starts the book in the passive voice and ends in the active, the grammar itself is the character's growth.
Worksheet Guidance
Part 1 Analysis
Active Characters: The man (opened), The master (entered, looked, decided). These are characters with social authority.
Passive Character: "I" (was told, was led). Despite being the narrator, "I" is the object of everyone else's decisions.
Part 2 Analysis
Passage A: The passive voice ("was whipped") emphasizes the victimhood and the systemic nature of the violence. It frames the aunt as a recipient of horror.
Passage B: The shift to "I seized," "I held," "I had resolved" signals a revolutionary shift in identity. Douglass is no longer "property" to be acted upon; he is a man who acts.
Truth Serum Project Guide The Truth Serum
Culminating Project: Rhetorical Reconstruction
Final Project
The Objective
Throughout this sequence, you have seen how politicians, journalists, corporations, and authors use the passive voice to mask agency and evade responsibility. Your final task is to act as a syntactic whistleblower . You will select a passive-heavy public document and "inject" it with the truth serum: The Active Voice .
01
Select
Choose a document (300–500 words) known for its "distance." Options include: A historic treaty, a redacted police report, a corporate crisis statement, or a confusing Terms of Service agreement.
02
Reconstruct
Rewrite the entire document into the Active Voice. You must research or infer the specific agents (who did what). No "it was decided"—you must find who decided.
03
Critique
Write a 2-page reflection paper analyzing how the shift in voice alters the ethical, legal, or emotional weight of the text. Does the document become more honest? More dangerous? More human?
Project Deliverables
The "Original" vs. "Reconstructed" Comparison
A side-by-side presentation of the text. Highlight the passive verbs in the original and the active verbs in your rewrite. Footnote your research: How did you find out who was responsible for the "mistakes made"?
The Rhetorical Reflection Paper
Address these questions: How does the active voice change our perception of the "victim" and "perpetrator"? Why did the original author choose the passive? What social power structures were protected by that choice?
Project Timeline
Day 01
Proposal & Doc Selection
Day 03
Syntactic Mapping (Draft 1)
Day 05
Peer Review: Agency Check
Day 07
Final Presentation
Rhetorical Reflection Template Project Reflection Protocol
Rhetorical Reconstruction Analysis
Researcher:
01. The Artifact Context
Identify the original document. Who was the intended audience? What was the primary goal of the text (e.g., to inform, to apologize, to restrict liability)?
02. The Syntactic Shift
Select the most impactful sentence from your reconstruction. Contrast the "Passive" original with your "Active" rewrite. Why did naming the agent change the tone so drastically?
Original (Passive)
Reconstructed (Active)
03. Power and Accountability
Analyze the "Agent Deletion." By removing the doer in the original, what specific power structure was being protected? What would be the real-world consequence (legal, political, social) if the original author had used your active version?
Synthesis Statement
Based on your work in this project, do you believe the passive voice is inherently deceptive, or is it a necessary tool for maintaining institutional stability?
