When to Quote vs. When to Paraphrase in Essays

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This instructional video guides high school students through the critical writing decision of when to use a direct quote versus a paraphrase in analytical essays. Using Toni Morrison's novel 'Beloved' as a case study, the presenter demonstrates how to integrate evidence effectively to support a thesis statement about literary motifs and character memory. The video distinguishes between analyzing specific language (which requires quotes) and summarizing events (which uses paraphrasing). The content covers key writing concepts including thesis statements, full direct quotes, partial quotes, paraphrasing, explanation sentences, and analysis sentences. It provides visual examples of how to structure a body paragraph, showing text on screen that integrates evidence with the student's own voice. The lesson emphasizes that the choice of evidence format depends entirely on the writer's purpose and what they intend to analyze. For educators, this video serves as an excellent model for teaching evidence integration and literary analysis. It moves beyond simple definitions to show the *why* and *how* of writing. Teachers can use this to help students move away from "quote bombing" (dropping quotes without context) and towards sophisticated embedding of partial quotes and meaningful analysis of diction and syntax.