How to Write a Strong Essay Introduction

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This engaging video lesson breaks down the art of writing an effective introduction paragraph for an academic essay. Using a theatrical opening and clear visual aids, the narrator demystifies the purpose of an introduction, explaining why it is often easier to write this paragraph last—after the thesis and body paragraphs are established. The content addresses common student anxieties about starting an essay, whether from having too much to say or writer's block, and offers a strategic approach to overcome these hurdles. The core of the lesson introduces the "Three Ps" framework: Pique, Provide, and Produce. Students learn how to "Pique" the reader's interest with a strong hook while avoiding clichés like rhetorical questions or dictionary definitions. They learn to "Provide" necessary background information to contextually ground the reader, and finally, to "Produce" a clear thesis statement. The video provides specific examples of weak versus strong hooks and demonstrates how these elements come together in a sample paragraph about Queen Victoria. For educators, this video serves as an excellent direct instruction tool or review for middle and high school English Language Arts classes. It tackles specific writing pitfalls—such as the overused "Webster's Dictionary defines..." opening—and offers concrete alternatives like anecdotes or setting descriptions. The clear segmentation of the introduction into three distinct components makes it easy for students to self-assess their writing and ensures they include all necessary elements in their essays.